Colin
Mr. H Salsich
8 English
1/26/10
1. One writing issue I am continuing to work on:
_____When I first wrote this, I forgot to incorporate To Kill a Mockingbird in it, so this is still a work in progress.
2. One strong point I see in this piece of writing:
_____All the information in this essay is completely true and I feel like that is a very strong aspect for this essay.
3. One possible weak point I see:
_____I think this essay could still be smoother because some of the transitions are a little rough.
4. The grade I would give myself:
_____When I first wrote this, I forgot to incorporate To Kill a Mockingbird in it, so this is still a work in progress.
2. One strong point I see in this piece of writing:
_____All the information in this essay is completely true and I feel like that is a very strong aspect for this essay.
3. One possible weak point I see:
_____I think this essay could still be smoother because some of the transitions are a little rough.
4. The grade I would give myself:
_____For this essay, I would give my self a B because I feel I worked hard on this, but there are still somethings that are a little week and need to be strengthened.
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