Essay 22 Self Assessment

Colin

Mr. Salsich

8 English

5/12/10

Self Assessment

1. What am I continuing to work on?

In this essay, I am always working on making it flow nice and smoothly because I feel it still needs some improvements with that.

2. What is a strong point?

A strong point, I think, would be the bell words because I repeated them many times and it helped the essay have more unity.

3. What is a weak point?

I think a weak point would be the intro and concluding paragraphs because they still seem a little weak to me.

4. What grade would I give myself?

For this essay, I would give myself an "A-" because I worked very hard on it, it took a lot of time to put together, and all in all, I think I did a good job.